My essay offered a strong argument and presented the logic in a clear, superb, and calculated manner, a consistent anxiety of mine! This time I was very pleased because I spent a few hours deciding just how to structure this essay, now having two characters each with different characteristics I wanted to highlight! Nonetheless, this structure aided me to enhance my main points.My analysis was quite developed for Claudius, but I could have suggested more about Gertrude's feminine language. Using my two past essays as evidence, I believe that my strong areas that I will carry on for future essays are...
originality of topic
catchy and clever title
providing an"unarguable" argument
strong analysis
structure appropriate for the topic
I can still benefit from toning down my language and even further using the evidence to back up my main point. Next time, I will tear apart the diction that the speaker uses and talk about its correlation to my paragraph's subtopic.
I should have cleared the historical evidence prior, yet I didn't know that it was necessary. I thought that it was almost ludicrous to NOT mention it, leaving out the context for the deceit, intimidation, and imitation. However, I understand your point and I will come to you prior to discuss.
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