Wednesday, November 24, 2010

Setting- Blog #3 (To Be Graded)


Setting not only includes the physical scenery, but also incorporates the connotations from the scenery in relation to the moral, social and intellectual customs of the time period. Therefore the customs create the stage for the audience to understand the context in which the setting occurs. In this way, the setting can divulge the crucial themes on which the author intends to expand upon. Knowing that Pride and Prejudice takes place in Longbourn, it would be ludicrous to ignore the city’s emphasis on social class and reputation. Could 18th century British society provide a context for Mrs. Bennet’s obsessive preoccupation with social climbing? Lurking below the superficiality of her manner, the reader finds Mrs. Bennett conforming to the demands of her society and interpreting them without regard for values, ethics or love.
Evidently, finances and convenience, rather than romance, provide the foundation for relationships and marriage in Mrs. Bennett’s tightly defined world. The reality of having to raise five daughters stresses the imminent threat to poverty. Therefore, in this setting, Mrs. Bennett acts rationally because marriage was not about love, rather about safety, security, and reputation. Even though Jane Austen weaves a tapestry of an unattractive individual who appears to be made from simple, whole cloth, Mrs. Bennett’s superficiality and obvious social climbing skills reveal her as complicated and outrageously ostentatious. Austen’s portrayal of Mrs. Bennett teaches the reader that unattractive does not necessarily mean uncomplicated because her sole purpose derives from her desperation to achieve social status for her daughters. Thus, Jane Austen portrays Mrs. Bennett as a petty social climber, a pestering wife, and an inattentive mother, branding the reader with the impression that she is shallow and defined by the pressures of her society. Reality proves that she is a devious and multidimensional character quite capable at achieving her vapid goals.
Clearly, Austen uses Mrs. Bennett’s character as a canvas on which to portray the established social order of the time. While pretense has always been an important part of organized society, it especially plays an influential role in highly stratified societies such as 18th century England. In Hamlet, Shakespeare demonstrates the beginning of social stratification in England, which would soon birth a rigid, yet tainted hierarchy of inheritance. A new ruling class was emerging and it was imminent that the first-born sons of wealthy landowners would inherit their fathers’ assets. King Claudius and Queen Gertrude’s deceptive conduct proved to be the foundation for the dysfunction that was rampant in the Danish court. Their royal relationship, how it began and how it existed, defines the setting for the play, sets the tone, and presents the context for a vengeful plot.
Therefore, the “royal mischief” and 17th century hierarchal society, referenced by Claudius and Gertrude, provide fertile ground for escalating domestic dysfunction. It would be foolish to think that Shakespeare was oblivious to his historical facts and that Denmark was a random location. The king at the time was King Charles, son of James, son of the infamous Mary Queen of Scots. Also, King Charles’ mother was a princess of the Danish Court. Dysfunction in royal families was fairly well known among the common people and suspicious during the 17th century. Shakespeare chose to portray these situations knowing that his audience could relate to the theme of “ Royal mischief”.

Character- Blog #2


In both fiction and drama, the plot revolves between the tension between the protagonist and antagonist. For Shakespeare the power struggle occurs between Hamlet and Claudius and for Austen between Elizabeth and Darcy. Though Hamlet and Elizabeth seem to both be riding the psychological rollercoaster, they possess an intellectual curiosity. Through self-reflection, indecision, and love, Hamlet and Elizabeth demonstrate their ability to think clearly. Though Hamlet contemplates suicide and Elizabeth is rivaled by Darcy’s excessive affection, both characters represent the struggle between their personal values and what is best for their family’s situation.

Plot Blog #1


A plot is the main idea of the story based on conflict. By tradition, plot is defined by the exposition, foreshadowing, conflict, rising actions, climax, falling action, and denouement.. Therefore, a plot is like a map for the storyteller because it emerges from the setup of characters and their revolving conflicts. A story without plot is just endless descriptions of lists, but plot provides fertile ground for a story that has a beginning, middle, and end. Arguably, the plot is the overarching umbrella under which character and setting thrive. In Pride and Prejudice, the story revolves around Elizabeth and her mother’s need to marry her off well. The climax therefore occurs when Elizabeth accepts Darcy’s proposal, but the excitement seems to plummet after this scene. In Hamlet, Shakespeare provides multiple climaxes for his readers to keep them intrigued about his story. However one of the most poignant climaxes occurs during the “play within the play”. After Hamlet notices Claudius’ guilty mannerisms, he becomes bent on revenge. Unlike Pride and Prejudice, the thrill, horror, and anxiety continue till the very last sentence. 

Wednesday, November 10, 2010

Turnitin.com Notes

My essay offered a strong argument and presented the logic in a clear, superb, and calculated manner, a consistent anxiety of mine! This time I was very pleased because I spent a few hours deciding just how to structure this essay, now having two characters each with different characteristics I wanted to highlight! Nonetheless, this structure aided me to enhance my main points.My analysis was quite developed for Claudius, but I could have suggested more about Gertrude's feminine language. Using my two past essays as evidence, I believe that my strong areas that I will carry on for future essays are...
originality of topic
catchy and clever title
providing an"unarguable" argument
strong analysis
structure appropriate for the topic

I can still benefit from toning down my language and even further using the evidence to back up my main point. Next time, I will tear apart the diction that the speaker uses and talk about its correlation to my paragraph's subtopic.

I should have cleared the historical evidence prior, yet I didn't know that it was necessary. I thought that it was almost ludicrous to NOT mention it, leaving out the context for the deceit, intimidation, and imitation. However, I understand your point and I will come to you prior to discuss.

Sunday, November 7, 2010

Ozymandias and Ponder Intro


The frailty of life and the futility of love are the central threads though Shelley’s Ozymandias and Cummings’ Ponder. By providing such a realistic, contemporary and personified image of Time’s dominance, both authors seek to refute idealism in attempt to study the permanence of art, a seemingly ironic concept. The poems describe a simple situation: A man and a woman regard the ancient statues as the man urges them to seize the day before they are ruined like the statues before them. Besides the subject, the links between Shelley and Cummings are numerous. Shelley’s archaic language and unfinished sentence structure reflect the irony of time and situation. Similarly, Cumming’s typography and playful tone reveal his parody of love through jarring juxtapositions. Their message is simple: Time in inescapable; yet time can either dilute greatness or provide an excuse for copulation.

Ozymandias and One Evening

Both Ozymandias and As I Walked Out One Evening can be reduced to the metaphor that “Time is the ultimate conqueror”. Ozymandias develops this theme through 14 lines of irony, while Auden uses much simpler syntax and 15 quatrains to do this. Ozymandias exploits verbose and stilted diction to develop the themes of evaporating arrogance, permanence of art, and desolate setting. Alternatively, “One Evening” refers to the futility of love to portray Time’s devastating capabilities. It is interesting that Ozymandias begins my describing a traveler from a vast desert wasteland, whereas Auden places the reader in a busy city where people are packing the streets, just like wheat that blooms when ready for harvest. Both poems conclude with Natural Time being eternal, warning the reader the nothing grand in life endures except for nature.

Ozymandias and Ponder


Ozymandias and Ponder use time as a means of devastation: “ My name is Ozymandias, king of kings: Look on my work, ye Mighty, and despair! Nothing beside remains.” The once powerful and influential kingdom no longer thrives, withered by time. His imperative sentence connotes that the king was proud of his hegemony, but now, however, the kingdom is reduced to nothing, no immortality or legend as expected. In fact, the name Ozymandias accurately implies the short-lived grandeur. His name seems long, important, and strong willed, however, Greek etymology reveals that it actually means “Ruler of the Air”. By metonymy, I wasn’t sure how to decide it’s actual meaning, but I understand that the Ruler of Air could refer to the Ruler of Nothing or the Natural Ruler. After all, nature proves to be immortal with the stature fading, but the sands “that stretch far away”. Ozymandias leaves the reader feeling dejected, anxious about age, and dubious of “power”, whereas Ponder mocks the concept of time and immortality alluding to other poems in a silly manner.